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Time for some feedback. I read some of it last night but couldn't make it to the finish line. This morning, I just got finished reading it.
With the starting segment of Jack Benevolence 'pooing' on The Warden's intro. Makes you want to just beat the hell out of him but you can't, he's the 'greatest on this planet, he's an expert at his craft, a True Expert and he has the title to prove it. Then out comes the hero in CJ Gates to save the Warden from getting dropped. JB started with the shove, CJ was about to end it with the finish, but the good ole' manager Russell White saved his man from getting pancaked. CJ just 'showed up' the True Experts Champ. The Champ is gonna get got! LoL
I really digged the detail within the video packages before the matches, the history well written as a video through words.
The first rivals match, Team SCCW vs Team VWF. This match was a brawl. At first I was like, damn, SCCW is getting ousted one by one until Riku hit that sick Corkscrew 630. All those revolutions cost VWF their first elimination. It was balls to the wall with the two teams. VWF took advantage once again eliminating all but one in Hannah Rickman. She completely went 'H.A.M' and destroyed VWF one by one. I thought too she had it but Edmunds went 'Power of the Punch' and clocked her. Edmunds got the victory for his team but he knows in the back of his head that payback's going to come for that. That match was off the chain, setting off the rest of the rival team matches.
Onto the next segment, Doug E. Fresh pissing off Noble's peace time in getting ready for BAD ASS. The tension between these two cannot be cut with a knife. Luckily for Doug, he didn't wind up knocked out cold. However the Professor just got psyched out by Noble. Those great psyche games come into play. This is far from over! Awesomeness!
This goes right into M.D.K/JR, the chemistry is well documented between the two. Rivals, somehow on the same damn page. That is rare. I felt for Larry Smith, nervous as hell between those two, haha. The personalities of the two are like Peanut Butter and Jelly. Love it! That true expert tag match is gonna be huge.
Next, grudge match between Noble and BAD ASS, this was definitely a hit. Both sides were equaled with BAD ASS taking that knee. They both gave their all and to see BA torture Noble with his own Finisher was epic, almost had Noble tapping but Noble pulled it out and ends it with the Noble Neckbreaker. The crowd goes wild. BA steaming like a kettle while I said that Noble/Fresh was far from over.
I truly enjoyed the read. The depths within the matches and segments were a hit. The hard work to pump out the first portion for us as it leaves us waiting for that 2nd and 3rd. I know over the past I haven't left my voice in feedback, but I truly respect your hard work to not only write these matches and add loads of detail and realism to it, but to do it within an unexpected time. I thought you were going to put the first up for today but you did it last night. Stellar work!
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